Rejection

by Ren   Oct 3, 2006


Hold you
squeeze you
Touch you
Love you

slap me
punch me
curse to me
hate me

Forgive you
Respect you
Kiss you
love you

Forget me
Reject me
Kick me
Hate me

...
I always loved you
You just never
Love me back...

Like most of the poetry I put on this website, It doesnt have to do with me...Once again, I just felt like writing.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Scott C

    Its amazing how one may right so passionately and depict with such absolute perfection the feeling of rejection, when one has never expierenced it themselves. but you sealed the deal girl. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Eman D

    Thats what u call one sided love. U described it perfectly. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan Hickling

    Very good poem, i know how it feels to be rejected like that, conveyed very well, with the layout adding more power to the words. congratulations.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I love how this poem has only 2 words per line. It really emphasizes the meaning behind the words. It's funny how saying so little is saying so much. I really like it!! Great job! =)

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