by Megann Lee Oct 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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Pale mummified lips pressed together too tight. |
by Jessica
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Ooh, I really liked this. The flow was good, the descriptions full of life and the emotion clear. It was very interesting and kept my attention. Nicley done 5/5 |
by Darien
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Wow, this was a very bizarre poem, and the funny part is, it made so much sense to me! I liked how your fumbled with the lines. Being right from wrong and know wrong from right. The hidden rhyme of 'key' and 'free'. Those two words work well together. Really good poem, but very weird to me! lol |
by PygmyPuff
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This has great symbolism without becoming mucky and unclear. Its very good, keep up the good work |
by Arsalan D
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Great poem my man i enjoyed reading it |
by Robie Lincer
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This poem is very true! |