by Megann Lee Oct 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Pale mummified lips pressed together too tight. |
by Jessica
Ooh, I really liked this. The flow was good, the descriptions full of life and the emotion clear. It was very interesting and kept my attention. Nicley done 5/5 |
by Darien
Wow, this was a very bizarre poem, and the funny part is, it made so much sense to me! I liked how your fumbled with the lines. Being right from wrong and know wrong from right. The hidden rhyme of 'key' and 'free'. Those two words work well together. Really good poem, but very weird to me! lol |
by PygmyPuff
This has great symbolism without becoming mucky and unclear. Its very good, keep up the good work |
by Arsalan D
Great poem my man i enjoyed reading it |
by Robie Lincer
This poem is very true! |