Marvellous penned, simply beautiful, yet flowed with great message!

Amazing poem.. I loved everything about this, the wording, the message everything.. Excellent 5/5 xx

Wow, Megan. This is one of the best poems, I've read by you so far. I mean all of them are amazing, but so far, I'm liking this one a little more.
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Love,
Your Emo Wifey

Goodness!, very nice write.
This is such a masterpiece you have written, just very effective.

God Bless!

Great penned poem, it is great with great word choices and great meaning, i really enjoyed reading it, keep up the best job like always, a 5/5 cus it dont deserve anything less than that...

Terrific! The whole idea behind this poem is amazing. I love it. A creative piece, put together perfectly. It had great meaning and an even better ending. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

'Ellohaaaaaaaaaaaa.
This was a great poem! I loved your word usage, really made the poem interesting!
Keep it up. [:

Very unique. good message. i liked how the end of each stanza rhymed and it flowed very well. great poem! sometimes it got a lil off course though where i couldnt really understand it but over all it was a good poem. and thank u for comemtning. i fixed taht lil part in my poem! thanks! 5/5

Exellent flow and rhythem. also very good imagry. an exellent poem with a powerful message.

shadow dancer

Wonderful job. My favorite lines were
"Faith has it out for you only it can decide.
It's not easy saying who lives and who dies."

Very true, keep it up

This poem is very true!
keep it up
i loved it alot

This poem is very true!
keep it up
i loved it alot

Great poem my man i enjoyed reading it

This has great symbolism without becoming mucky and unclear. Its very good, keep up the good work

5/5

[PygmyPuff]

Wow, this was a very bizarre poem, and the funny part is, it made so much sense to me! I liked how your fumbled with the lines. Being right from wrong and know wrong from right. The hidden rhyme of 'key' and 'free'. Those two words work well together. Really good poem, but very weird to me! lol

Ooh, I really liked this. The flow was good, the descriptions full of life and the emotion clear. It was very interesting and kept my attention. Nicley done 5/5