Wow i really like this a lot. i neverr read a halloween poem before. but yours was amazing. 5/5

This is a really great holloween poem. I think that it was an excellent write. I could actually imagine all the excitement going on, on hollows eve. once again you have give the reader a perfect read from an excellent poet. 5/5

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Letty

I love this poem! It's great, you have so much potential, looking forward to reading the rest of your works.
Keep 'em coming
Ash

Lan, this was simply beautiful penned, though short but great ended. good luck for a challenge/contest, have a great day, take care....best wishes from west, bert ~

Haha. I find this poem realllllly cute. Hehe. It made me smile. YAY For Halloweeen. :]

Wow, great one.....
I really like it, as always you have done a great job
5/5

Oh i like this =] I have never read a poem about Halloween before. I wish we celebrated it here, it sounds like so much fun. You did a good job, and you made good imagery. Great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Love it. It portrays halloween nicely...especially my brother's sweet tooth.

This is a nice poem ! i bet u won the contest you should! the poem was amazing

This probably will win its really gooooood xxx alex xxx
please read and comment some of my poems please much appreciated xxx alex xxx