Comments : The Stain

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This poem was incredible. I think that the word usage really drew a vivid picture and you did a wonderful job with it. Thanks for the good read!5/5!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a moving and sad poem...very sad. Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Mother effer this was a great poem. I loved it. It was so sad, and it brought a tear to my eye. For some reason - one I do not know, it reminded me of myself. Because everyone thinks they know me when they don't...

    "A crimson stain is all
    that can be recalled
    by those who swore they knew"

    ^^ Those lines are what had that affect to me.

    I loved it. It was amazing.

    5/5

    -Jenna.