Remade

by Krzysztof J   Oct 3, 2006


With broken wings i came to you,
a shattered heart, a lost soul too,
at the edge of despair, with no one to really care,
i stood upon a cliff so high,
ready to jump, ready to die,
i heard your voice call out my name,
so sweet and heavenly, it drowned out the pain,
"I'm here for you boy its true, no matter what i will love you!"

A shattered soul, a broken heart,
ready to jump and end my life,
i would have jumped if not for you,
lost my soul, to the devil too,
one simple word made me freeze
and turn around in the breeze,
with that one word you made me cry
because of it, i can not die,

and as i turned and looked at you
my soul and heart, were made anew,
my broken wings began to heal
and again i could feel,

it's hard to say these words to you,
i feel so bashful, a kid anew,
what i feel i cant deny
without you here, Girl id die!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Love it love it love it!!

    It has a happy ending! He gets the girl!
    Yay!
    Some beautiful imagery here hun.
    Fantastic!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    :)
    Thanks for the comment!
    This is such a good poem. It's cute:)!
    Keep writing love.
    5/5
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, another wounderful poem. so sad and happy. u got a gr8 clear image:)

  • 18 years ago

    by marcelah

    Aw. this poem is sweet, nice work.

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