Aw. this poem is sweet, nice work.

Wow, another wounderful poem. so sad and happy. u got a gr8 clear image:)

:)
Thanks for the comment!
This is such a good poem. It's cute:)!
Keep writing love.
5/5
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Love it love it love it!!

It has a happy ending! He gets the girl!
Yay!
Some beautiful imagery here hun.
Fantastic!
5/5
*Gem*