Review of the situation.

by reborn   Oct 3, 2006


I had to work to go to Vietnam
But instead I didn't give a damn
Suddenly I realize
That the result of my life lies
On my shoulders
Don't have any backers
That's how it is
If you don't wanna wear BITI'S
For you it seems
That I've got no self esteem
Well it depends
On how the story ends
If I appear as a d-i-c-k
Of course with no chick
Cause I can do it
I know it
I ain't ugly
So tonight I'm gonna be ready
Wish me luck for the party
I'm gonna need it you'll see.

Is it gonna be like in Saigon
Where I used to have so much fun
Where I just kept partying
And dating
Where people know my name
It's really not the same
Where the rest of my family
Is surely happy.

I wonder what's my fate
Am I gonna have a date
How will my life
Be like with a wife
What am I talking about
Don't you remember your last kick out
Where are you off with your MLK
Did you ever have a day
Of pure joy
Maybe as a little boy.

If only I could play the guitar
And have a car
But that's my pal
Who also has a gal
Don't you get it
You don't fit
Get used to it
Or do something about it
Yeah I got to believe
That I can achieve
Something successful
In my dreadful
Life I'm living
Without ever succeeding,

What if
One day I could actually climb up that cliff
Will I be happier
When I'll meet her
Cause I won't be a liar
And she could call me a loser
With all my setbacks
Yes all those lacks
Of successful opportunities
Well the thing is
That I've never had
And it makes me sad
A relationship based on emotion
And that lasted more than a few weeks of vacation
Is it too much
To ask for such
A living
Really fulfilling.

You may think that I act
But in fact
Amid my youth
All this is the truth.

PS: Ok so BITI's is like a very cheap brand for shoes in vietnam. And MLK stands for Martin Luther King as in "I have a dream...", just an expression me n my friend used to use to mean a far fetched dream...

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