I wonder why
She just walks by
She doesn't look at me anymore
Damn it sores
I thought we would be together
For now and forever
So many promises
Like for instance
She told me one day
That I'm her sunray
What bullshit
And I didn't want to admit it
What a b-i-t-c-h
And I'm way down the ditch
I look at her with envy
But she doesn't even see me
Anymore
I'm off shore
I'm going down
Sadness grasps me from dusk to dawn
I'm such a f-u-c-k-e-r
To still love her
Thinking about suicide
End of the ride.
PS: wow such a bad rating so far... 1.8/5...haha oh well. maybe it's cuz of the last 2 verses. i reassure right now that was to give it an extra dramatic touch!! never even thought about it.
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