Its SOOO hard when she leaves, but even tho god may not be lisning an angel alwasy is :) 99/5

Im not going to pretend like i understand but i totally feel ur pain. btw God is always listening and there is nothing u can do to make him love u more and there is nothing u can do to make him love u less.

This is an amazing piece of work, i felt as if i was going through it myself. you have a real awesome talent! 5/5.

-Jessyka-

Awww this poem is sooo sad. I love it! lol...Well, here's the thing: Im not too good at explaining and analyzing-but i can just tell you how i felt about ur poem. good enough??lol hopefully. -- The poem was amazing, as if she didn't really care that you were suffering bcuz you needed her. Especially got that feeling at the end of the poem. I LOVE YOU LOL TAKE CARE..

I really like this poem .... it's short but it gets the point across, also I couldn't help but deeply relate. Anyways good work and I really enjoyed your poems ... all of them!5/5