Man that was a very nice poem!! Love hurts sometimes, and people are not what they seemed too... Ur absolutely right u will find love again, n that girl was just not worth it. anyways great poem, loved the way u wrote it, had passion

AWESOME! that is deep. the ending is amazing. admitting is a sign of strangth:)

Loved the poem thanx 4 the comment... anyway hope ur well xoxox

georgia

Your really good at writing poems. i really like reading these ones. They are erally relating to me right now because I am getting over a guy that broke me down becuase I wasn't girly girl enough. It really kills so I know how hard it is to have to be strong when everything is pushing down on the inside

This poem is great. The more i read it the more i want it to go on and on. Very powerful and heartfelt. Your strength really comes through in the poem and a fab choice of words. I just love it.

Kelly
xx

Aww its good to no ur ok the girl didnt deserve u...

"I'll grab the pieces and walk away
I'll always fight another day,
you though you had me, girl its true
took it for granted when i loved you"

This is one of my fave poems by you!
I can't describe what i feel from reading this, it's a mix of emotions.
Bloody excellent poem hun!
5/5
*Gem*