Nice poem, it rly shows a lot of depth, keep it up!
~[pisangz]~

Amazing poem. its very well written. 5/5 keep it up.

Nice poem. it was a bit confusing for me. probably because nothing is making sense right now.. but it was good. 5/5

Wow... very nice, had plenty of emotion, and good use of words.

it really hits home for me. 5/5

I'm inda dizzy but from what I got the poem is very good and well written. 5/5

I'm kinda dizzy but from what I got the poem is very good and well written. 5/5

An interesting poem, it seems we may have some things in common, good work

Hey gorgeous, tis i! i liked the rhyming, and it was a good poem, kind of sad =( none the less good. feel better soonish?
Me
xxx

Nice poem, alot of emotion was put into it! Good job! Keep it up 5/5

Wonderful piece of work. I loved it 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

OMG!!!!!! i love ur poem, it is awesome, so much emotion in it!!! i love it!!

I can see how confusing everything can get. I know how that can be. too confusing. :( I liked this. good stuff :)

Great poem! I could really relate to you there, I felt your yearning within me too. 5/5!!