LOL, I know this is in the dark section but i found it funny, it was the twist at the end that made me smile. And as for me making your work like crap-I don't think so...you seem to have beaten your writers block and the stuff your writing now is good because it's different from your usual style which is really refreshing-so syop putting urself down cos ur wrong!!!
Love you,
Beth XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

I'm not sure if you meant this as funny, but that's how it struck me. I thought it was hilarious, but kinda true. LOL An unusual way to look at humanity! Jpoet*

Zombiefied through lifes pain is the way I saw this one, and thought it rather sad.. another excellent poem 5/5 xx

I just wanted to say that I appreciate your comments because you always critique me honestly. You hear so many ppl say how much they LOVE your poems, but to get just one person who says what you can improve is a big help...which is the pt of these comments. so thank you...Jpoet*

Lol
nice way to picture society.
its a very abstract way to look at it.
short and not-so-sweet.
lol
awesome
~emma