by ASPHYXIATED Oct 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Destroy all the evidence, |
by Tricky Daze
There were such powerful words and phrases...And I liked the topic so much..The flow keeps you going and nowhere It broke down |
by tyanna
Wonderful job Lisa...I really liked this poem, especially the repititon...5/5 |
by Tara Kay
Lisa, this was an awesome poem. |
by Pure Silence
Vivid, really haunting. Lisa your writing has this unique quality that leaves me thursting for more, each line leands to the next and I just cann't look away. |
Oh wow.. This has to be my favorite of all your poems. It is so strong, so beautiful, so true...so wonderful! I am amazed...I would use some different punctuation..But other than that I see no flaws within this. GREAT job! |