Well penned, m'darling. I loved, but not as much as I love you! 5/5
It's an amazing poem. =]
Love,
Heater

A really great poem, very powerful. Love the repetition of the lines:

Destroy all the evidence,
Sugar coat the lies,
Beautify the bruises,
Orchestrate the cries.

really makes them stand out and makes the message stonger. good work :)

Oh wow.. This has to be my favorite of all your poems. It is so strong, so beautiful, so true...so wonderful! I am amazed...I would use some different punctuation..But other than that I see no flaws within this. GREAT job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Vivid, really haunting. Lisa your writing has this unique quality that leaves me thursting for more, each line leands to the next and I just cann't look away.

Destroy all the evidence,
Sugar coat the lies,
Beautify the bruises,
Orchestrate the cries.

I want to eat it, its so good. I'm proud of you

Mummy

Lisa, this was an awesome poem.
It was so deep, your words always leave me feeling strange, you have so much power in your writing
love Tara-Kay

Wonderful job Lisa...I really liked this poem, especially the repititon...5/5

There were such powerful words and phrases...And I liked the topic so much..The flow keeps you going and nowhere It broke down
Good job,
Laura