Up and Gone...But Why?

by Bradley Peter   Oct 3, 2006


I asked, and I begged, just for you to stay
But you took one look, and turned away
And right there I fell, straight to my knees
And all I could think to say, was "Please"
But you left anyway, slamming the door
Leaving me naked, on the naked floor
Ten minutes before, we laid happily in bed
"Was it something I did, or something is said?"
That day still haunts me, even three years on
How we'd made love, and then you were gone
Even now I struggle, trying to understand
"Was it all in an instant, or was it all planned?"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Sad.
    so very sad.
    good bundle of emotions.
    again original.
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Aww what a sad poem, beautifully written though, the rhythmn and flow was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    U make me look lyk crap, i post lyk 1 poem evry couple of weeks if I'm lucky and der u r wiv ur 3 at a tym!!! I think this one is possbly my favourite of the 3, but it was a tough choice between the zombie 1 that made me smile and this one. I'll stop writing page long comments now os I no ur ored ov reading this already!!!
    Beth xxxxxxxxxxx

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