U make me look lyk crap, i post lyk 1 poem evry couple of weeks if I'm lucky and der u r wiv ur 3 at a tym!!! I think this one is possbly my favourite of the 3, but it was a tough choice between the zombie 1 that made me smile and this one. I'll stop writing page long comments now os I no ur ored ov reading this already!!!
Beth xxxxxxxxxxx

Aww what a sad poem, beautifully written though, the rhythmn and flow was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

Sad.
so very sad.
good bundle of emotions.
again original.
~Emma