Amazing, Lisa. It's totally amazing. I loved it a lot. My dreams are beginning to seem further away, but then so close at the same time.
Well, ily.xx
Love,
Heater

An interesting poem about the viewpoint of a much forgotten member of society. Well done.

Wow. I love this poem, and the story it tells. I thought you started it out extremely strony with these lines:
"He lays his head upon a stone,
The ally way his nightly home,"

Than you ended it even stronger making the poem amazing.

For some ; Life ain't as simple as it seems.
((Instead of using 'ain't', use 'isn't'..It sounds better.))

I really liked this poem. I have not read anything like this on the topic...and it was very well written and strong. You captured the man well and painted a picture for me.. Again, try using more describing words.
Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Aww.. this was so sad. you did an amazing job on this and the meaning behind it was very well thought out. You ended it very nicely and it kind of gives people something to think about. Great job on this. 5/5

Sharp, dark, and very honest and true. amazing work, keep on writing, you're doing such a great job!

~jas~

Very true, sad but so so true.
This poem was perfect, it showed great imagery, emotion was deep, words were chosen well.
another great write
love Tara-Kay

Very melancholy. The straightforward "life ain't as simple as it seems "message that was portrayed throughout the poem then stated at the end was quite pungent.
As I was reading it seemed as though "beer" appeared an awful lot during the poem making it somewhat tedious...maybe you could edit this somehow?
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.