Drop Dead ; Gorgeous.

by ASPHYXIATED   Oct 3, 2006


Ribs on display,
Only skin and bone,
No food today,
No energy to moan,
Looking like a model,
Like the girls on magazines,
Pout for the camera,
Its time to live your dreams.

Skip another meal,
Your vision starts to fail,
strut your stuff babe,
With the attention of every male,
Your seeing through magnified eyes,
Your need to lose more flesh,
Skip another meal darling,
This one will cause your death.

It's time to drop dead ; Gorgeous.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Wow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Haven

    Very well written and so true about todays society:D 5/5 lovely flow managed to keep it all through the poem

  • 18 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This poem is so true...my friend turned anorexic...its so sad
    well written and lots of emotion
    5/5
    Luv fallenxFromxGrace

  • 18 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    A very powerful message..keep up with the writting..please comment and rate my poems...thanks ~DARK~

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Now, I will be honest on all my comments. I did not like the topic...and the way you wrote it just is not the best I have seen.
    BUT...
    I LOVED the ending more than anything...Such a beautiful ending should have a beatiful poem before it...
    And even though the flow was perfect...I feel you could use more describing words.
    In conclusion: I really loved the ending, that is what made the poem for me... And you wrote the overall poem well, I just like giving suggestions. =] Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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