by Bridgette
Aww.. this is really sad. I know exactly what you're going through. I used to have an eating disorder and it still affects the way that I eat now. I hope that you are ok :) Beauty on the outside is nothing compared to beauty on the inside, because outward appearances always fade. Good luck to you! && Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem! Stay strong! |
by N M Lambert
Thanx for your comment on my poem, i thought i'd check out your's- this is really really good, well written and seems close to the bone with every line you write. anorexia is such a dreadful thing and you capture the fear, despair and a twisted relationship with oneself perfectly. 5/5 xx |
by Hear You Me
I saw that you had commented on one of my poems, and i thought i would return the favour. this poem is so sad and i think it portrays anorexia really well, although i do hope that it is nothing that you have had to endure. great poem sweety, Ginnie x |
by Autuumnbree
I really feel like sorry for you, I been struggling with my weight as far as I can remember, and I'm over weight and truly it's disturbing to me, you always feel like your lesser than a person. I can go on, and on but I won't...Xcellent Poem. |
by Gem
Oh wow! |
I love this poem. I gave you 5/5. |
by *Charisma*
Okay...i liked this poem and the thought behind it...but I think the rhyme scheme really needs some help. I think it needs to flow better....just my thought Jpoet* |