You are an excellent poet. You do not need to worry about ryhme. It is a good tool but not neccesary, especially in todays world. Poetry with no ryme is a form of abstract art. It's different but it's still good. Read Walt Whitman, he's my favorite. People thought he was evil, gay and a lot of other things because of his "different" form of poetry.

Im glad to see im not the only one.(not a lot of readers around me) I am always looking for something to read.

Very good imagery.

Dang thats SICK!! i love it so much it brings me back dang keep tat shit up n keep ya head up!! damn lol

You've got lot's of talent...i would write more of a comment but i'm just about ti go to bed...but i did vote on all of you poems:)
auna

Wow. Awesome, Chicka! I love -
'your the drug that gets me high then you leave
me to die and fight this addiction on my own' - the best verse I've seen in a while.

Don't forget, I'll always be your number one fan. **Always**.

Thanks so much for your comments, they mean more than anything ;)

~Scarlett