by mane Oct 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I wont hide, you will never find the key that i have. bulls running through the barrow i got in my hand. cant stop me now. you should of took the advice of that fukken cow. she knew what she was talking about. did i not tell you once, now i have to tell you again. i got another message for you babe, you're wasting your time with with me, because I'll never, I'll never let you in. the glass eye through the door, i see you waiting, what the hell are you thinking get the hell out of here. you cant come in. i can hear breathing, it does nothing to help me. my mind start blushing then i take a squeeze. |
by x.Athame.x
Hmm... This is overall a decent poem. I understand your idea here, but I think that you need to work on your flow a little bit. Its just a little un-even which ruins some of the read. 3/5 |