It's a harsh world to bring kids into nowadays, but they are our future.. Teach them well and maybe they can change the way of life in the future..
Excellent poem, The rhythmn and flow was brilliant.. well done 5/5 xx

Well...I'm pretty much stunned. The wording and story can't be faulted. i can't say much more than that.

Brad
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P.S. If I gave this poem a tag line, it would be 'The perfection of ingenious'

That was a great poem! Thanks for all your heartfelt comments. Yes my parents have a wonderful marriage. It's a blessing! Jpoet*