I love this poem it made me happy... and i don't really know why... any way i think all your poems kick ass... keep it up!!!!!!!
~*~ jess ~*~

Great poem , i liked this one a lot.

Wow,so know how you feel i've tried and tired to write happy poems but it never works..but the most i ever got to being was writting a poem about my little sis...awsome poem though
auna

Wow you actually wrote a happy poem, I dont think I could ever write happy stuff. LoL i have to stick to the cutting and breaking lol
awesome though

I really like this poem. one of the best ive come across. keep up the good work
XD

Okay, I declare this poem to be the best yet. Thats it. Its sealed. I LOVE IT! It is sorta, a happy poem for the darkness in it..wow. Yeah, I'm running out of compliments here hehe. It rocks. I'm gonna go comment and read your other ones =DD

Wow this one i really liked. i can relate. i have the same problem. lol try to write about flowers and skeletons come out. 5/5 all the best wishes ben thompson