Comments : Helping Me

  • 18 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Liked the rhyming nice job on the poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was really good Jpoet. I really liked how you were going to switch places with her like she was a COMPLETELY different person. Great job!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job. Wonderful flow to the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    Hey Jpoet. That was great :) Nice way to tell people your being the real you now

    Love Niquee

  • 18 years ago

    by ChaoticSchemer

    That was an excellent poem. Very bold. Some words of advice from one person that truly knows. ALWAYS be yourself. No matter what. Because you can't live a lie forever. I love you're use of words and the way you played that poem out. Definitely a 5 on my part.
    *Keep smiling*

    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    This was a very intriguing(sp?) poem. It certaintly rhymes well and flows nicely, but it also seems to open your eyes to something new. Fantastic work, I cannot wait to read more of your work. x33

    P.S. Thanks for the comment on one of my songs. :]