Liked the rhyming nice job on the poem |
by Midnight Sun
This was really good Jpoet. I really liked how you were going to switch places with her like she was a COMPLETELY different person. Great job! |
by LadyPearl
Beautiful job. Wonderful flow to the poem. |
Hey Jpoet. That was great :) Nice way to tell people your being the real you now |
That was an excellent poem. Very bold. Some words of advice from one person that truly knows. ALWAYS be yourself. No matter what. Because you can't live a lie forever. I love you're use of words and the way you played that poem out. Definitely a 5 on my part. |
by Miss Megan
This was a very intriguing(sp?) poem. It certaintly rhymes well and flows nicely, but it also seems to open your eyes to something new. Fantastic work, I cannot wait to read more of your work. x33 |