Dark world

by The Black Rose   Oct 3, 2006


My dark life
in a balck world
full of secrets
full of lies
all i see is darkness in this world
and no one cares about another
a rich suit or a poor man
what does it matter
we're all people
and all we do is thinking about ourselves
and don't care about the other
i say
we're supposed to look after eachother
and help if we can
but now there is just my dark life
in a black world
full of secrets
full of lies
and no one to care

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Very good... and true everyone only cares about themselves and needs to start caring about others... 5/5 Thanx for the comment
    Keep writing

    sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    You've really gotten something here. I agree completely. Well done.

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