Etched Tears

by Andi   Oct 3, 2006


She lied there in bed,
lights out pillow propped up her head,
tears streaming down her face,
etching lines that could be traced,
memories of you,
her old beaux,
making her so incredibly sick,
the flames of faith without a wick,
her dying soal morned over you,
she knew this love had to be true,
cause her hearts in pieces,
scattered on the floor,
memories of your kiss,
and far, far more,
She'll never be over you,
Her one true love,
and the reason her life was shattered.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    This is really mystic and sad, in a sense. I love the mood it sets off. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fairytales

    Hey! ;P Thanks for commenting on my poem, and I love yours! It's so... touching, definitely came from the heart. ;P

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I really like this. its beautiful, yet sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Hi Andi.
    Thanks for the comment.
    This is a great poem.
    5/5