BROKEN

by XxChelseaXx   Oct 3, 2006


I look into the mirror
and see my eyes
it's clear to see
they're all out of cries

I dont look like me anymore
I wonder what went wrong
It's as if my life started singing
a whole different song

my moms always getting drunk
and my dad was never there
I'm almost at the point
to where i dont even think they care

I'm just another lonley teen
living in a broken home
it's clear to me now
that I'll always be alone.

~please comment and tell me what you think~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww...this is sooo sad..but VERY good! u have alot of great poems!
    ♥ Lucy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is a sad and good poem.there was a lot of emotion in it. i think you should have had the last lines ryme, they are the most important ones that should ryme. i love how when you
    write, you get straight to the point, so im not reading this uber long poem and getting bored!my favorite lines are in the beginning:

    "I look into the mirror
    and see my eyes
    it's clear to see
    they're all out of cries"

    great job, keep up the good work! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    Your an excellent writer i love this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Ok wow this is soo sad, but you did a great job writing it. i can relate to some of it. amazing job here. keep writing you soo good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marthe Dybdahl

    I love this poem. Almost jus s I feel somtimes myself. You are good:) Keep on writing!

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