I love this poem. Almost jus s I feel somtimes myself. You are good:) Keep on writing!

Ok wow this is soo sad, but you did a great job writing it. i can relate to some of it. amazing job here. keep writing you soo good 5/5

Your an excellent writer i love this poem

This is a sad and good poem.there was a lot of emotion in it. i think you should have had the last lines ryme, they are the most important ones that should ryme. i love how when you
write, you get straight to the point, so im not reading this uber long poem and getting bored!my favorite lines are in the beginning:

"I look into the mirror
and see my eyes
it's clear to see
they're all out of cries"

great job, keep up the good work! 4/5

Awww...this is sooo sad..but VERY good! u have alot of great poems!
♥ Lucy