Thank you for your input on my school shooting poem. Its nice to get more feedback than the usual "wow your good" and stuff like that.

This is creepy and awesome. Love it.

Especially the line -
'Her past is lost in presence,
her future lost in pain,
her world is broken apart,
fallen down with the rain.'

I can't wait to read more by you :)

{if you like, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}

~Scarlett

Wow, realy deep poem. the ending is perfect. there's alot of regrets in the poem:)

This poem is really goo i really like it. you are a very talented writer. i hope to read more of your poems shanik