by LadyPearl Oct 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Tis a water of mud fellow Americans drink |
by Mommy And Me
Deep.. true... and well written.. good work :) |
by Kelsie
Wow.this is insane. |
Brilliant!.....Strive on...... |
by Jessica
Wow, Noni you are amazing.. You have such talent and you use it so well.. The flow in this is good except for a few lines and the descriptions leave me awe-struck.. You truly have a wonderful way with words, keep it up! 5/5 |
by Arsalan D
This is a wonderfully written poem with even a better message. It is unreal how delusional some societies can be. Throughout my life I've always hated politcs but it is only recently that I have discovered that anything and everything is linked to politics. To the qulity of air we breath to the general likes and dislikes of the general public. Thanks for posting this poem it has a lot of meaning. |