Wow! this poem is great and full of emotion. i loved it. i especially love the stanza "Why are we trynna hang to sumthing that isn't there...
That all of your excuses are a cover up for tha fact that u just dont care."

great job. ive got u in my favourites so i can keep up to date with ur new poems.

sophie:)

ps. i would love ur opinion on a few my poems.