Die Alone

by Bryan   Oct 3, 2006


Sunset's innocence
I see in your eyes,
sorrowful feelings
you say goodbye.
My heart falls apart
when our eyes meet,
its dying alone
so incomplete.
Nowhere to go
nowhere to hide
nowhere to heal
all this pain inside.
Don't know what to do
don't know what to say,
don't know why this hurts
every single day.
And Its just so painful
when I try to write,
feelings of torment
they are not right.
I will die alone
this I know,
forever consumed
by the love you let go.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    This was very meaningful and I used to feel like this before. You are pretty good with your writing, 5/5. Keep it up, it's amazing to find good writers with passion. Thank you for sharing!!

    xxSedushaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Perfect! this one is very simple and wonderful.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by V dog

    This is so cute...but sad! I like all your poems by the way and i just wanted to comment on this one because it just got to me. ya so keep it up you are amazing!!!
    -vanessa

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    So sad and yet so beautiful. Your soul crys out from every word. I really loved this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Im pretty sure its painful, not painfully.

    Its just so painfully

    but i really enjoyed this poem. lovely work. keep it up.

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