Very nice poem. I really liked this part.

this I know,
forever consumed
by the love you let go.

Nice job.

This poem is full of emotion! I love this because of the impact it has on me. Its great! You have my attention for I have once felt the same. You lost me once but I referred to the beginning and found myself. Other then that GREAT WORK!!!!
~ skittles
p.s. thank you for the comments!

Keep it up
5/5

EXCELLENT..one of those sweet yet stomach knoting poems!!! just beautiful!!! good job!
xoxo
vic

Im pretty sure its painful, not painfully.

Its just so painfully

but i really enjoyed this poem. lovely work. keep it up.

So sad and yet so beautiful. Your soul crys out from every word. I really loved this one.

This is so cute...but sad! I like all your poems by the way and i just wanted to comment on this one because it just got to me. ya so keep it up you are amazing!!!
-vanessa

Perfect! this one is very simple and wonderful.. 5/5

This was very meaningful and I used to feel like this before. You are pretty good with your writing, 5/5. Keep it up, it's amazing to find good writers with passion. Thank you for sharing!!

xxSedushaxx