A very solid poem. I can relate in many ways. Nice job.

"with out you here
be my loving wife."
^
(to)
I love the poem but honestly i think you should make a correction. lol I think people know what you mean though. Btw thank you for commenting my new poem~ it is always appriciate it

Wonderful poem. another 5/5. Keep up the good work.

Good job.. keep it up.. i really liked it
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5/5

That is sweet, beautiful, and just perfect. i loved the wording and the meaning behind the poem. excellente!

Comment #4:

I don't know how you keep up so many great subjects.

Your voice is serenity
playing in my heart,

I LOVED those lines! Amazing picture portrade (sorry for the spelling, lol)
Wonderful job once again!
~Midnight Sun

Aww Bryan this is beautiful! I have to search for poems on here that I haven't commented on yet... lol you need to get some new poems up here bud! =] Thanks for the comment on Except The Ashes... I'm sorry about what happened to your grandfather... May God Bless Him! Great job and keep it up!!
~Ciao

I like this one!..it kinda reminds me of a guy=]