Well, that was a very nice poem Nat. I liked the style, I thought it added to the poem. Grrr, I think I am way too lazy to try formed poetry. I'm sure I can do it, but I just don't like limiting myself, I'm not smart enough to think inside of the box! lol

Love it. Very inspirational. The last two lines sound like me. Keep it up
*Don't let those downvoters win!^-^*

This poem is very inspirational poem!an i can sense the mood of this poem very well! keep it up!