Terrific write.Your word choice is great and you knitted it carefully into a poem.

God Bless!

I had to read this several times, but then again hat is what poetry is about.

I think you have done a wonderful job here babe.

--Sher

Omg jenna. i love it!tiz so well written.. im so proud of all your work.. and its not even my work! haha :P