Hmm.. very sad piece you have here, I hear a heart sigh.
Well its good that you let your emotions out, and poetry is the best for it,, and with your talent every write is a masterpiece.

God Bless!

This is a very sad piece, but on the other hand you have written it wonderfully. I can feel the sadness and the cries of a child yearning desperately for their mum.

--Sher

This was a well written piece. Sad, but flowed well and with a message that was heart wrenching. Could definately feel the hurt and fear of a child.

Great job

Peace be with you
Jeannie

Oh dear... this one is so touching deary. i dont no what to say