Behind Evil Eyes {CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 4, 2006


Every moment a new eye opens, shining with ecstasy,
With much hidden meaning of silver decay, strict to believe,
Hardened thoughts of disintegration, behind those evil eyes,
Call for thought, dedication in these elements of surprise.
In our eyes so effulgent are glassed mirrors, reflection
Stories behind evil eyes conducted by an effortless string.
Behind evil eyes lies doormat a story you'll never see;
One begs to picture, imagine, so quickly criticize,
Behind evil eyes is a soul and heart full of believing.

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Understanding: Behind 'evil eyes' you will find more than just dismay and malice...
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The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.
The rhyme scheme for this form is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Extremely well written. However... i think you might be missing a line--- CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme: consisting of one 10 line stanza---theres only nine. I might be wrong, that could be how you wanted it... But is an amazing poem either way! Another Great Work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Woow.... that was simply amazing. i am in awe!!! definitely keep up the phenomenal work!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Intresting poem... I like it. 5/5!Thanks for your comments on my poems and the advice. Thank you!!
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    A very interesting poem, never have I read a poem in this form.
    It is well written with such depth.truly a
    Great masterpiece.

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wow interesting rhyming style (thanks for the explinaion. a really powerful poem! very well written

    shadow dancer

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