I loved the meaning to this one. Another very good write from you. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

Very deep poem. I had to read it several times to gain it's true messages. Great descriptions.

I was wondering if there's a problem in this line:
"Behind evil eyes lies doormat a story you'll never see;"

It doesn't connect

It's getting late, I'll finish the rest tomorrow.

Wow interesting rhyming style (thanks for the explinaion. a really powerful poem! very well written

shadow dancer

A very interesting poem, never have I read a poem in this form.
It is well written with such depth.truly a
Great masterpiece.

God Bless!

Intresting poem... I like it. 5/5!Thanks for your comments on my poems and the advice. Thank you!!
xx

Woow.... that was simply amazing. i am in awe!!! definitely keep up the phenomenal work!
-xXx-

Extremely well written. However... i think you might be missing a line--- CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme: consisting of one 10 line stanza---theres only nine. I might be wrong, that could be how you wanted it... But is an amazing poem either way! Another Great Work!!!