I see that you have changed your writing style now, when I was here last time your lines were longer.

Great Poem. Addresses identity crisis and will be appreciated by teens. But writing about the concept is not easy, one must know himself/herself pretty well to write about identity. I also think that this shortened lineas and poem of your is a good achievement. I seem unable to change my style to short writing no matter how hard I try.

Wow, this poem is amazing. I really enjoyed reading it. I can totally understand what you are saying. Great job 5/5
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Burning~Wings

I really like this piece.. very moving.. btw thanx for the comment! mmk thanx.. 5/5

Wow..i really love this poem and i'm sure to us the ones who cares about you your more then just perfect...but anyways i like how describe how much you not perfect...and as i said it before you are more then Perfect.....Peace...

Jay!

Wow I love this poems sooo much.
its really good and i think it says more than a mouthful. :)
5/5

Koriey

OMG! this is awesome.. i really like it.. really unique

This poem is a really gud one it really talks about life bcuz there always ppl that make fun of u of who u are so dis really touched me keeep on writing dis poem is really gud!

I actually quite like this poem because it's no offence but not what it says on the tin. The name doesn't grasp the poem, or I don't think so...I like it that way, like with my poem In Iraq On Family. It bases around war yes but the name makes no sense corresponding to the poem. Really well done.
5/5.
Poppet