Woow this is soo sad, i loved it u capture soo much emotion great job ;).

Aw, wow! I wrote a poem once just like this. It was my 17th birthday, and it felt like the worst day of my life. I ended up staying home eating a chocolate cake all by myself in my bed. It was terrible.

Even though I don't know who you are, I hope everything's okay. I know what it feels like for it to be your birthday and you're just still upset & stuff. If you ever need to talk, feel free to PM me. :]

Keep up the good writing though! I liked this poem alot, mainly cos I can relate. 5/5

Natalie``