Such lovely words than you |
by x.Athame.x
Beautiful. Nice imagery, cadence and wording. I believe this is the first I have read of yours that didn't have a specific rhyme scheme. I liked it a lot, but specifically these lines: |
by Kimmaly
Can I just tell you, you are one of my favs on here. I love your words and how you express you feelings. I'm just a beginner but hats off to you. |
by Misstress
Very well written, I like how a Rose become a symbol of a soul/life, and by kissing its kinda a touch of gentleness/tenderness that warmth anybodys heart. |
by blueknight
Very wild imagination and great subject also and great message are you trying to put across I love the symbolic and the flow of the story of the poem very nice penned and beautifully created Great job |
I loved the overall flow of the poem, great read indeed. Robert. |
by BlueMoon
I love this ! |
by Kali
Absolutly amazing |
by Faust
LOVE IT (I AM A SUCKER FOR POEMS THAT INVOLVE THE WORD ROSE) |
by dora
I l0ve the detail and the way u wrote this poem xx |
I love reading your poetry. |
BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!! You are very talented, you were so detailed and made the poem flow. Wonderful job 5/5 |
by Letty
Awww!!!!! This poem is extremely beautiful! I loved the beautiful picture of romance you have painted here, The love in this poem is so strong that it pulled me all the way in and knocked me off of my feet. I love this stanza: |