by Esther Oct 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Many know me, |
by Robert
The way this was fashioned it took some thought to do and that was good keep up the good work. Plot121 |
by Pure Silence
You do Indeed meet fish bowls requirements, |
by Lenny
Oooh noice! Best acrostic poem I've read in ages... I memba when they were the only ones I wroted! |
Very interesting |
by Jessica
This was pretty good.. I found that it didn't really have a point and it definetely wasn't a dark poem.. It was okay though.. I liked how you wrote "My Smile" in the last line.. Maybe add more details.. Or like make it have some meaning.. Nice job though, keep at it. 4/5 |