Aww i really like this a lot.
it was defiantly really good.
you had a few spelling mistakes tho.
but the poem itself was wonderful.
keep writing 5/5

I love it!! Its really good! Keep writing! Im defo going to read some more by you, and keep a lookout for new ones. xx

This was pretty good.. I found that it didn't really have a point and it definetely wasn't a dark poem.. It was okay though.. I liked how you wrote "My Smile" in the last line.. Maybe add more details.. Or like make it have some meaning.. Nice job though, keep at it. 4/5

Very interesting

Oooh noice! Best acrostic poem I've read in ages... I memba when they were the only ones I wroted!

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Poem:
something i can relate to, however if this is a darker poem the "!" sort of takes away from the mood...

Well done, I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us. C:

The way this was fashioned it took some thought to do and that was good keep up the good work. Plot121