Hey, this is pretty good...well described and i can tell it came from the heart... but i know that you ended up with the right guy..no matter what happens..you guys were meant to be.. maybe a suggestion for the title could be another number? or something like that..i dunno..but i know you that you know you picked the right guy..
~Luv Always Lana

This is a really deep poem, and it really expresses the problems and issues of growing up and young love. maybe something like stolen innocence would suit it ( looking at the 2 to last verse). just a thought. great work though- keep it up!