Do you really love me

by chris   Oct 4, 2006


Have u ever fell in love
only to get a little shove
to push you far away
ill always remember than month called may

i fell so deep i couldn't beleive
only for her to up and leave
i tried to get close to my love
only to realize heaven above

yes i have prayed but no one heard
not even my own word
guess my love will never know
for feelings i could never show

i loved her so much
just wished we kept in touch
i hurt all over
maybe i'll jump from a cliff in dover
do this is what i ask
to try get from behind this mask

do you really love me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Caytii

    Its an overall good poem but u start off with four lines in each stanza den after a while if u read it out loud the rhythm will change since theres 5 or 6. good poem tho. really thoughtful. keep it up. -katie

  • 18 years ago

    by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings

    I really like this poem. I read all of them and I can relate to almost all of them good work!! But I really like it I think this poem is my fave So yeah. Well g2g

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