Comments : You are the one

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    Is it suppose to be
    i love that touch
    i love the way you breath on my neck
    you r the one

    cause i thought that was the direction u where going with this but there r a few letters missing to complete that picture. I advice u to reread this and make sure u got it saying what u want it to. I have had to do this before myself. Otherwise I think this is a nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    My wording in prior quote of your poem is messed up but it is close to it or close to what u meant