The Emo Kid {Rondel}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 4, 2006


If you do not like the \'flow\' of the poem, it is written in a certain style, explained below.
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Ecstasy is not present within the emo kid,
As dancing crimes they do display, singing of their lies.
How sweet and simple is our delight; they still defy
Of our melodic kids cry out in pain; we forbid.

A masquerade of lies and blood they dance amid,
Scheming of death shattered that we crucify;
Ecstasy is not present within the emo kid,
As dancing crimes they do display, singing of their lies.

Lying of tales so mournful, so untruthful our emo certainly did,
Their lives of horror set as wondrous and mystified.
They scream out to the world as they there lie,
For their heart full of aspersion and deceit to be amid,
Ecstasy is not present within the emo kid.

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Rondel: A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows:
ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiff

    Niiice poem, haha i dont even get it, i've bee going around bagging all the other "poets" bagging emo's. but urs has the only poem that i dont understand, i think ur poem makes sense. but i guess not enough for me to understand :) good poem keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is really good I loved it. Even if I didn't understand the style of it lol. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Ooh, I like it! It was very interesting and I did like the flow.. It went quite smoothly for my liking.. The descriptions were good too! Nicely done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    The flow was actually not bad at all for these types of poem, I can definatly appreciate these kind of forms of writting because I used to do them alot and they're very hard. Very interesting topic, you seemed to do a pretty nice job of getting the meaning through although it took a few reads, keep working and thanks for presenting the oppertunity to read a very unique poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, this poem sure has a strange rhyme theme, which made it unique and different. Great job.

    -This wasn't as good as your other ones, the message didn't seem to be strong enough.
    Keep it up^-^

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