Sea of Heartbreak

by Mousie   Oct 4, 2006


In the rush of a wave
The tears fall down your face.
You're so alone in this sea
Of unhappy fates.

You're drowning in sorrow
The crashing of the tide
Against the rocks of your obstacles
Under which your unhappiness hides.

The storm keeps brewing
Soon comes the wind and the rain,
Forbidding black clouds loom
Bringing the haunting pain.

But out of this darkness
Comes your angel's light,
He is your rescue
Causing you to put up a fight.

You fight off the storm
With the tears wiped away,
You'll be safe in his arms
Where forever you'll stay.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. I love the imagery. Nice flow. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a great poem, i loved the ending lines

    "You fight off the storm
    With the tears wiped away,
    You'll be safe in his arms
    Where forever you'll stay."

    great job, 5/5!!! keep it up and thanx for the comment on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I loved this! I thought the flow was excellent, and consistantly followed a pattern, which is always a good thing. Excellent wording, too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Mousie you are so talented i wish i could be half as good as you keep writing!! 5/5 by the way did you get my email? ttyl love yas solo

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